Hello! It's great to see you have so many corrections already, here are mine. :)
String cheese
Whether you are American or not you, should know something about "string cheese." Throughout the world you can find different types of cheese, but the string-ability process is an American trademark.String cheese is made of mozzarella cheese. Mozzarella has its roots in Italy from a long time ago. It is a mixture of milk, culture and rennet. After a very long and particular process, the cheese curds are heated to melt. When the curds are melted into mozzarella, it is stretched and rolled into a ball. At this point the mozzarella has a peel-able quality to it. This particular quality (peel-able) is possible only because the string cheese is made from mozzarella. Those sticks made with other cheeses are not string cheese! Remember that....use your finger to peel your string cheese...Don't try to eat without this operation or the people around you will laugh at you....!Haha, I rather like the ending. I think you are getting better in your writing. The mistakes are common, but all of your sentences now make sense and are generally in a good order.
String cheese
Whether or not you are American, you should know something about "string cheese". You can find different types of string cheese across the world [You could also say "Throughout the world, you can find different types of string cheese..."], but the stringing process [This is a guess. I'm not sure what is meant by "string ability process".] is an American trademark. The string cheese is made of mozzarella . Mozzarella originates [Not sure what you mean by "roats", so this is another guess.] in Italy from a long time ago. It's a mixture of milk, culture, and rennet. After a long and thorough process where the cheese curds are melted. [You could say heated to melt, but it's redundant in this case.] When the curds are melted, the mozzarella is then stretched and rolled into a ball. At this point the mozzarella has a peelable quality to it. This particular quality is the reason that string cheese is made with mozzarella. [It might be more suitable to say "is made from", particularly if the majority of string cheese consists of mozzarella.] Those sticks made from other cheeses are not string cheese! [This sentence sounds a little off to me, but it's grammatically correct.] Remember that. Use your finger to peel your string cheese. Don't try to eat it without doing this first or people around you will laugh at you!
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String cheese
Whether you are American or not, you should know something about "string cheese". In the world you can find [There are many] different types of string cheese [in the world], but the string ability process [stringiness typical of this kind of cheese? process of making string cheese?] is an American trademark.- "in the world..." this is not technically wrong, but a better way to say this would "there are many" and to move the "in the world" to the end.
- i'm not too sure i understand what you mean by string ability process but i gave a copy of suggestions that might fit.
The string cheese is made of mozzarella.
Mozzarella roats [was developed] in Italy [a] long time ago, [and] it is a mixture of milk, culture and rennet.
- i'm not sure which word you are referring to with "roats".
After It is a very long and particulary [specific] process, where the cheese curds are heated to melted.When the curds are melted mozzarella is, stretched and rolled into a ball.
- these two sentences can be combined into one: "..., where the cheese curds are melted, stretched and rolled into a ball." are the curds melted into mozzarella?
At this point mozzarella has a peel-able quality to it. This particulary [particular] quality (peel-able) is the reason because [why] the string cheese are [is] made with mozzarella.
- be careful with the words "particularly" and "particular"! these have very different meanings. "particularly" means "especially" (ex: this cheese is particularly peelable!) whereas "particular" means "specific" or when used to describe someone "not easily satisfied".
Those Cheese sticks made with other cheeses are not string cheese! Remember that....[:] use your finger to peel your [the] string cheese... Don't try to eat [it] without this operation [any other way] or people around you will laugh at you....!
- "without this operation" isn't grammatically incorrect, but doesn't fit this situation. (ex: She has cancer and will die without this operation.)
- a main clause must come after the word "that", so it would be better to use a colon (:) instead.
let me know if anything needs explanation! thank you for your explanation for the process of making string cheese, i never knew the type of cheese used was important! you are definitely correct that string cheeses must be pulled apart to be eaten correctly. can't trust anyone who just bites into it...
String cheese
Whether you are American or not, you should know something about "string cheese". Throughout the world you can find different types of string cheese, but the string ability process is an American trademark. The string cheese is made of mozzarella. Mozzarella comes from Italy a long time ago. It is a mixture of milk, culture and rennet. After a very long and particular process where the cheese curds are heated to melt, the curds are melted and the mozzarella is stretched and rolled into a ball. At this point, mozzarella is easy to peel. This particular quality (peel-ability) is the reason the string cheese is made with mozzarella. Those sticks made with other cheeses are not string cheese! Remember that....use your finger to peel your string cheese...Don't try to eat without this manoeuvre or people around you will laugh at you....!Very well written and informative!
