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Bon Jovi Bon Jovi is a classic rock band from New Jersey that has been out for over 30 years. Their total album sales have exceeded 120 million and are widely welcomed worldwide. First of all, referred to Bon Jovi had to mention the famous song, It’s my life included in Crush. The song was released in 2000, but first time I heard this song when I was a junior high school. I was attracted to hard rock melody and marvelous roaring voice. The lyric of this song is about the attitude that we should real live in life. A lot of things are not going to experience the feelings now and also will only become an empty talk. Whichever the song itself or the background meaning is full of positive energy. The first part of the Bon Jovi’s songs style is very different from middle part of ones. The first album from the same name in 1984 "Runaway" until 1992 "Keep the faith" style more popular metal music. Since 95 years of "These days" genre began to change, adding more other musical elements such as blues or country music. However, until last year Bon jovi released the new album “This home is not for sale”, the music styles return to rock. Although this band is not young before, it has not dumped their rock soul. It’s very admirable.
Dec 27, 2017 5:45 PM
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Bon Jovi

Bon Jovi is a classic rock band from New Jersey that has been out for over ( was formed in 1983 / has been going for 30 years). Their total album sales have exceeded 120 million and they are widely welcomed worldwide. First of all, when referring referred to Bon Jovi, it is important to mention the famous song, 'It’s my life' included on the album entitled 'Crush'. The song was released in 2000, but the first time I heard this song was when I was a junior in high school. I was attracted to the hard rock melody and the marvellous roaring voice. The lyrics of this song is about the attitude that we should adopt in real live in life. A lot of things are not going to experience the feelings now and also will only become an empty talk. Whichever The song itself or the background meaning is full of positive energy. The first part of the Bon Jovi’s songs style is very different from middle part of ones. Throughout time the band Bon Jovi changed their sound as they progressed, experimenting with the different genres emerging at the time. The style of the first album from the same name in 1984 "Runaway" until 1992 "Keep the faith" adhered to the metal music popular at the time. By the time the album "These days" was released, Bon Jovi  had begun to change its style of music, adding more other musical elements such as blues or country music. However, until last year with the release of their latest album Bon jovi released the new album“This home is not for sale”, it would seem that Bon Jovi has returned to its original roots, keeping alive the rebellious spirit of rock more commonly associated with the beloved Bon Jovi. 

the music styles return to rock. Although this band is not young before, it has not dumped their rock soul. It’s very admirable.

December 28, 2017

Bon Jovi

Bon Jovi is a classic rock band from New Jersey that has been out around for over 30 years. Their total album sales have exceeded 120 million and they are widely welcomed acclaimed worldwide. First of all, referred referring to Bon Jovi I have had to mention the famous song, “It’s my life”, included in on the album Crush. The song was released in 2000, but first time I first heard this song when I was a junior in high school. I was attracted to the hard rock melody and marvelous roaring voice. The lyrics of this song is are about the attitude that we should really live in life. A lot of things are not going to experience the feelings now and also will only become an empty talk. Whichever whether the song itself or the background meaning, it is full of positive energy. The first part of the Bon Jovi’s songs style is very different from middle part of ones. From The first album from the same name in 1984’s "Runaway" until 1992‘s "Keep the faith", the style was more popular metal music. Since 95‘s years of "These days", their genre began to change, adding more other additional musical elements such as blues or and country music. However, until last year when Bon jovi released the new album “This home is not for sale”, their music style returned to rock. Although this band is not young like before, it has not dumped their rock soul. It’s very admirable.
December 28, 2017
I can't correct this whole entry at the moment, but I just wanted to tell you something about the phrase "has been out" that you used in your first sentence. "To be out" can mean "to be released" when referring to a product becoming available for consumption ("That movie has been out since July."), but when talking about people, "to be out" usually means to be public about one's LGBTQ+ identity ("She has been out as bisexual since 2007."), and a band is a group of people, so I don't think that phrase means what you wanted it to. I'd use "has been active" instead. :)
December 27, 2017
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