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The Tim じぁん!!!
It was sunny today. After school, my mom took me to a newly opened restaurant. It had a setup similar to a conveyor belt sushi spot, but with a fun twist: instead of sushi, the belt carried an endless variety of premium mini hot-pot ingredients. We sat at the counter, each of us with our own tiny pot, and just like at a sushi restaurant, we could grab whatever dishes caught our eye as they passed by. The whole experience reminded me of that famous sushi place with the lottery-style game where certain dishes trigger prizes, though sadly, this restaurant didn’t have anything like that. I wish they do it in the future.
Apr 10, 2025 1:02 PM
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GuideDogSaint李凯森
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It was sunny today. After school, my mom took me to a newly opened restaurant. It had a setup similar to a conveyor belt sushi spot, but with a fun twist: instead of sushi, the belt carried an endless variety of premium mini hot-pot ingredients. We sat at the counter, each of us with our own tiny pot, and just like at a sushi restaurant, we could grab whatever dishes caught our eye as they passed by. The whole experience reminded me of that famous sushi place with the lottery-style game where certain dishes trigger prizes, though sadly, this restaurant didn’t have anything like that. I wish they do it in the future.
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Sounds fun!
Apr 11, 2025 4:00 PM
The Tim じぁん!!!
^_^Yes, and yummy too. Thank you very much
Apr 12, 2025 12:47 PM · Reply
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Danielle Koen
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It was sunny today. After school, my mom took me to a newly opened restaurant. It had a setup similar to a conveyor belt sushi spot, but with a fun twist: instead of sushi, the belt carried an endless variety of premium mini hot-pot ingredients. We sat at the counter, each of us with our own tiny pot, and just like at a sushi restaurant, we could grab whatever dishes caught our eye as they passed by. The whole experience reminded me of that famous sushi place with the lottery-style game where certain dishes trigger prizes, though sadly, this restaurant didn’t have anything like that. I wishhope they do it in the future.
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Beautiful writing! The only thing I would adjust is using "I hope" instead of "I wish." This is because wish is more for things that are impossible like "I wish I was taller!"
Apr 11, 2025 8:36 AM
The Tim じぁん!!!
Well, I do think it’s very unlikely they would do that, so… Thank you very much ^_^
Apr 12, 2025 12:49 PM · Reply
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