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90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up about 6 o'clock weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have a dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and spend a little time for me. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it work out just only once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my target foreign languages. 5) I bought 10 new German books nowadays. But I want to read my English books first.
Sep 4, 2024 11:07 AM
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90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up at about 6 o'clock on weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some housework and then I can have a little time for myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but I can only do it once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to help me learn my target foreign languages. 5) I've recently bought 10 new German books, but I want to read my English books first.
Sep 4, 2024 12:17 PM
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up at 6 o'clock weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some housework and then spend some time for myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it works out just only once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my target foreign language. 5) I bought 10 new German books, but I want to read my English books first.
Great job! Just a few small things and it was almost perfect.
Sep 5, 2024 2:36 AM
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences please? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up around 6 o'clock on weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but often I have my dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and have some time for myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it actually happens only once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my targeted foreign languages. 5) I bought ten new German books these days, and I want to read my English books first.
Sep 4, 2024 4:18 PM
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up about 6 o'clock on weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have a dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and spend a little time by myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it works out that way just once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to help me learn my target foreign languages. 5) I bought 10 new German books recently. But, I want to read my English books first. Your only genuine mistakes are these: #2: "for me" (grammatical, but doesn't sound good. "myself" is needed) #3: "it work out" #5: "nowadays" (Wrong because "nowadays" also includes the future. "Recently" only includes the past.) All my other changes are only suggested improvements. It is not wrong to say "I often have a dinner", though most people would leave out "a". The meaning changes slightly when you use "a". "Weekdays" means the same as "on weekdays". You can say it either way.
Sep 4, 2024 2:03 PM
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