I like spending time with my family but I'd also like some alone time every now and then. While my daughters are at school, I sit at the desk in a corner of the living room, which is my favorite place

Naka

I like spending time with my family but I'd also like some alone time every now and then. While my daughters are at school, I sit at the desk in a corner of the living room, which is my favorite place to relax. I surf the Internet and study English at the desk. During long holidays, it is difficult for me to find alone time. My first daughter wakes up early in the morning , on the other hand, my second daughter doesn’t go to bed early at night.When it’s a lucky day for me, I can enjoy alone time for 30 minutes early in the morning until my first daughter says “Good morning,Mum.”

Mar 19, 2022 11:59 AM

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March 19, 2022

I like spending time with my family but I also like to be alone time every now and then. While my daughters are at school, I sit at the desk in a corner of the living room, which is my favorite place to relax, where I surf the Internet and study English. During the long holidays, it is difficult for me to find time for myself. My eldest daughter wakes up early in the morning, while on the other hand, my other daughter doesn’t go to bed until late at night. It’s a lucky day for me when I can enjoy some time alone for 30 minutes early in the morning, which is soon ended when my daughter says “Good morning, Mum.”

This is a lovely piece of writing. Nice work. In terms of grammar, take another look at the first sentence. It might be a good idea to study the difference between "I like some time alone" and "I'd like some time alone". They have very different meanings! Nice work Naka!

March 22, 2022

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