李千金
My grandma’s cacti has been started to flower since last month even though my grandma is too old to take care of it. When the 'hat-like' flowers under the sunshine, the whole balcony is full of the sweet smell. I couldn't believe that such a blossom can be so powerful. There are splendid things inspire us despite suffering is one of the painful realities of life.
Jul 2, 2023 4:24 PM
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My grandma’s cacti started to flower last month, even though my grandma is too old to take care of it. When the 'hat-like' flowers under the sunshine, the whole balcony is full of the sweet smell. I couldn't believe that such a blossom can be so powerful. There are splendid things inspire us despite suffering is one of the painful realities of life.
I missed some stuff at the beginning :)
July 2, 2023
My grandma's cactus has started to flower since last month, even though my grandma is too old to take care of it. When the 'hat-like' flowers bloom under the sunshine, the whole balcony is filled with a sweet smell. I couldn't believe that such a blossom can be so powerful. There are splendid things that inspire us, despite suffering being one of the painful realities of life.
July 2, 2023
My grandma’s cacti has been started to flower since last month, even though she is too old to take care of it. When the 'hat-like' flowers are under the sunshine, the whole balcony is full of their sweet smell. I couldn't believe that such a blossom can be so powerfully fragrant. There are splendid things in nature that inspire us despite the fact that suffering is one of the painful realities of life.
Nice descriptive writing. It's nice to expand on these thoughts and use the beautiful words in English to paint these pictures. This is also a great exercise to get us speaking better. Hope this helped. Zàijiàn :)
July 2, 2023
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