March 3rd, 2025 It’s already March. Times fly so fast! We had snow in the evening for the first time in a while in Tokyo. It reminds me my hometown, Akita prefecture. It has a lot of snow this year

Emma

March 3rd, 2025 It’s already March. Times fly so fast! We had snow in the evening for the first time in a while in Tokyo. It reminds me my hometown, Akita prefecture. It has a lot of snow this year and my parents get tired of it. What to do for them in the morning is shaveling snow ⛄️ They can’t use shaveling machine because it may suck in stone under the snow and blow it with snow. My neighbor did it and broke the window of the house next to them.

Mar 3, 2025 12:22 PM

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March 3rd, 2025 It’s already March—time flies so fast! We had snow in the evening for the first time in a while here in Tokyo. It reminds me of my hometown, Akita Prefecture. This year, they’ve had a lot of snow, and my parents are getting tired of it. One of the things they have to do in the morning is shovel the snow ⛄️. They can’t use a snow blower because it might suck up stones hidden under the snow and blow them along with the snow. My neighbor did this once and ended up breaking the window of the house next door.

Tip: When describing something like a memory or comparison (e.g., “reminds me of my hometown”), use “of” after “reminds me.” Also, make sure to use appropriate punctuation (e.g., commas and dashes) to break up ideas for better readability. Lastly, double-check spelling, like “shoveling” instead of “shaveling” and “neighbor” instead of “neighbour” (depending on your English variant).

Mar 3, 2025 4:43 PM

March 3rd, 2025 It’s already March. Times flies so fast! We had snow in the evening for the first time in a while in Tokyo. It reminds me my hometown in the Akita prefecture. There has been a lot of snow this year and my parents are tired of it. What they do every morning is shovel snow! ⛄️ They can’t use a shoveling machine because it may suck in stones under the snow and they will blow out with the snow. My neighbor did it and broke the window of the house next to them.

Mar 3, 2025 1:21 PM

March 3rd, 2025 It’s already March. Times flies so fast! We had snow in the evening for the first time in a while in Tokyo. It reminds me of my hometown, in the Akita prefecture. It has been snowing a lot this year and my parents got tired of it as they have to shovel snow every morning ⛄️ They can’t use a shoveling machine (a “snow blower” seems to be the word you are looking for according to your picture and to what Anna suggested) here because it may suck in the gravel underneath the snow and blow it out. My neighbor did it and broke a window of the house next to his.

Well done Emma.

Mar 3, 2025 1:19 PM

March 3rd, 2025 It’s already March. Time flies so fast! We had snow in the evening for the first time in a while in Tokyo. It reminds me of my hometown, Akita prefecture. There they have had a lot of snow this year and my parents have got tired of it. What they have to do every morning is shovel snow ⛄️ They can’t use a shovelling machine [snow blower?] because it might suck in stones along with the snow and blow it out again with the snow. My neighbour did that and broke the window of the house next to them.

Well done, Emma! I think this machine is called a snow blower (I've not come across one in the UK, so maybe someone who lives in snowier climes can advise on that).

Mar 3, 2025 12:51 PM

March 3rd, 2025 It’s already March. Time flies so fast! We had snow in the evening for the first time in a while in Tokyo. It reminds me of my hometown, Akita prefecture. It has/is having a lot of snow this year and my parents get tired of it. In the mornings they have to shovel snow⛄️ They can’t use a shovelling machine because it could/might suck up stones that are hidden under the snow and blow them out with the snow. My neighbour did it and broke the window of the house next to them.

Well done Emma. Your poor neighbour lol

Mar 3, 2025 12:50 PM

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