I like to offer another writing style for you to try: The sun is shining brightly today. Maybe that'why I got up early at 7:30 in the morning. I feel good and I will go shopping to buy some fashionable clothes to wear when I go out with friends. I will also go to a beautiful cafe to enjoy an expresso. Since summer vacation is going to end soon, I should take a stroll in a nearby park and smell the fresh air. I am really looking forward to all these activities. How exciting this is going to be!!!

Today was a sunny day. I woke up at 7:30am. I will go shopping. Summer vacation will be over soon, so I'm looking forward to it!

Nice job!