my family is composed by two people s. my husband and me. we married last year. Both he and l are 27years old. we are always busy in job. he job is stock investor and l am a basic bank clerk. we bo

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my family is composed by two people s. my husband and me. we married last year. Both he and l are 27years old. we are always busy in job. he job is stock investor and l am a basic bank clerk. we both like pet. we has two pets that one called Ada and another one called chuanchuan. we have fed ade for 9years. chuanchuan came home last year .who is very shy and timid. ade is very outgoing and fierce. my husband and l is classmate. we love each other and very rely on each other. we have close hobby and habits. so we have lived in each other life peacefully for long time.

12 de nov. de 2020 7:17

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My family consists of two people, my husband and me. We got married last year. Both he and l are 27 years old. We are always busy in our jobs. He is an investor and l am a basic bank clerk. We both like pets. We have two pets. One of them is called Ada and the other one is called Chuanchuan. We have fed Ade for 9 years. Chuanchuan, who is very shy and timid, came home last year. Ade is very outgoing and fierce. My husband and l are classmates. We love each other and really rely on each other. We have similar hobbies and habits. So we have lived peacefully with each other for a long time.

This is a good piece of writing. "We married last year" is also correct but I changed it to "We got married last year" as this is much more common. Please let me know if you have any questions. Jamie (www.italki.com/jamie.teacher)

12 de noviembre de 2020

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