Polly
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
13 de nov. de 2020 17:31
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My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. Volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team sport. Also, I like to learn languages: English and Chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
Just a few minor changes to make it flow more smoothly. Your message was very understandable.
13 de noviembre de 2020
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
Good text
13 de noviembre de 2020
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