李春丛
today my boss sent me a message, asking me to buy some Tin foil online. I bought one but then I saw he asked me to buy five. I called the owner of the shop, asking him I ordered one but actually I need five. he asked me to add him on WeChat and pay him on WeChat. the price that he said on WeChat is 13 Yuan per roll, but I only paid nine for the first one. Since I don't buy things for years, I am not very aware of the payment. And it's difficult to say no or negotiate. then I called the customer service, he said that I shouldn't be lured to pay the seller without the platform. but as long as it happened, the platform will give me 10 yuan back.
3 de mar. de 2025 4:35
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Today, my boss sent me a message asking me to buy some tin foil online. I bought one roll, but then I realized he had asked me to buy five. I called the shop owner and told him that I had ordered one but actually needed five. He asked me to add him on WeChat and pay him there. However, the price he gave me on WeChat was 13 yuan per roll, while I had only paid 9 yuan for the first one. Since I haven’t bought things online for years, I’m not very familiar with the payment process, and I find it difficult to say no or negotiate. So, I called customer service, and they advised me not to pay sellers outside the platform. However, since I had already done it, they said the platform would refund me 10 yuan.
Tip: Your main points are clear, but try to use past perfect (“had asked,” “had ordered”) when talking about something that happened before another past action. Also, break long sentences for better clarity.
hace 11 horas
Today my boss sent me a message asking me to buy some tin foil online. I bought one but then I saw he had asked me to buy five. I called the owner of the shop, telling him that I had ordered one but actually needed five. He asked me to add him on WeChat and pay him on WeChat. The price that he quoted on WeChat was 13 Yuan per roll, but I only paid nine for the first one. Since I haven't bought things for years, I am not very aware of the payment/prices. It's difficult to say no or negotiate. Then I called their customer service, the man said that I shouldn't be lured into paying the seller without the platform, but since it happened, the platform would give me 10 yuan back.
hace 16 horas
Today, my boss sent me a message asking me to buy some tin foil online. I ordered one roll, but then I realised he had actually asked for five. So, I called the shop owner to adjust my order, letting him know I needed five rolls instead of one. He asked me to add him on WeChat and make the payment there. However, I noticed that the price he quoted on WeChat was 13 Yuan per roll, while I had only paid 9 Yuan for the first one. Since I haven’t purchased things in a long time, I’m not very familiar with the payment process, and I find it difficult to say no or negotiate. Concerned about the situation, I called customer service. They warned me not to be persuaded into making payments outside the platform. However, since the transaction had already happened, they assured me that I would receive 10 Yuan back from the platform. This version improves clarity, flow, and readability
hace 12 horas
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