Today, after i woke up, i pray ,eat and wash my dishes afterwards i went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while after waking up and shower and took a short trip to my elder sister place cause we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
✓ woke up
pray → prayed
eat → ate
wash → washed
after waking up and shower
→ ... and showerING
my elder sister place
→ my elder sister'S place
we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow
→ we... HAVE a plan to go to the market tomorrow
If you say you "had" a plan, I understand that you no longer have this plan.
It would be best to break this post up into at least three different sentences using punctuation.
25 de mayo de 2022
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Today, after I woke up, prayed, ate and washed my dishes, I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while. After waking up, I took a shower and visited my elder sister because we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
25 de mayo de 2022
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Today, after I woke up, I prayed, ate and washed my dishes. Afterwards I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while. After waking up and showering I took a short trip to my older sister's place, because we plan to go the market together tomorrow.
Here is another try to do it in the way which italki expects.
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