The day of ied al-fitr

Indonesian muslims have several unique traditions on the day of ied al-fitr. The most common tradition on the day of ied al-fitr is mudik. Mudik is when migrant workers to return to their hometown. They also used to make several unique cookeries on this day, such as opor ayam and ketupat. Opor ayam is a ckicken soup with milk coconut sauce and ketupat is a rice cake that is wrapped in young coconut leaves. Every Indonesian Muslims must be cook this cookery food on the day of ied al-fitr.They also give some angpau on this day. Angpau is money that is given by the oldest to the youngest relatives in their families. And The most wonderful tradition is takbir keliling. Takbir keliling is going around the village or city and said Allahu Akbar, which means Allah is great. At night they celebrate ied al-fitr with firecrackers and fireworks. Pilgrimages to tombs and wearing a new clothes is also a part of indonesian muslims tradition on the day of ied al-fitr. but The most interesting part of ied al-fitr of indonesian muslims traditions is when they gather, meet, and forgive each others. I love this unique tradition because everybody enjoys it and is very happy with it.

This was fun and interesting to read. I liked learning about your traditions.

When writing, you should be careful about making really long sentences connected with a lot of commas. You can see all the places where I added periods to the sentences. Once a thought or idea is complete, you should probably just end the sentence with a period and start another one. Also, you should probably capitalize the name of the event (Ied Al-Fitr). I did not do this in your writing because I was unsure if it should be capitalized or not. If it is the proper name of an event it probably should be capitalized though.

Good luck with your English studies.