Please help me with my essay about TET IN VIETNAM

Now I will talk to you about the Tet holiday in VietNam. Tet is the most important festival in vietnam. of the vietnamese calendar. It occurs around the beginning of February and end of January. During these days, people welcome a new the coming new year with good health, luck and success. Before Tet, homes are cleaned and the ancestral altars are decorated with a tray full of fruits and flowers. In addition, Tet’s food consists of sweets, coconut jam, lemon seeds and “thit kho”,….especially “Banh Chung”. On During Tet holiday, people have participate in many activities such as cooking rice, watching lion dance and Besides many people visit relatives to wish them a happy new year.Aldults will give lucky money for to children. Furthermore, some people like go to the pagoda. I really like Tet because it’s the time all of the  members in my family being get together .In short, Tet holiday is always will always be in Vietnamese’s heart.

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Please help me with my essay about TET IN VIETNAM

*Now I will *talk to you about the Tet holiday in Viet Nam.Tet is the most important festival of the Vietnamese calendar. It *occurs around the *beginning of February and end of January. *During these days, people welcome *a new coming year *with good health, luck and success. Before Tet, the home are *is cleaned and the ancestral altar are is decorated with a tray full of fruits and flowers. *In addition, *Tet’s food consists of sweets, coconut jam, lemon seeds, “thit kho”,….especially “Banh Chung”. On* Tet holiday, people have many activities, such as *cooking rice, watching the lion dance,…*Besides, many people visit relatives to wish them a happy new year.  Adults will give lucky money to* children. (Furthermore,) some people like going to the pagoda. I really like Tet, because it’s the time that all (members of) my family being are together. In short, Tet holiday is always in a Vietnamese’s heart*.

*This first sentence only if you are speaking to an audience [of people listening to you]

*tell you about

*it falls . .

*State these dates the other way around :  'the end of January and the beginning of February'

*At this time

*the New Year, or the incoming new year

*by wishing each other

* 'the home is . .' or 'homes are . .'

*Food at Tet also includes [consists of]

*During Tet <em>or </em>During the Tet holiday

*I thought Vietnamese people cooked rice all the time, not specially at Tet !

*and also

* 'have lucky money for children, <em>or</em> 'give lucky money to children'

*in the heart of the Vietnamese