Yesterday's birthday celebration.

Yesterday was my birthday. I got up in the morning, and I was expecting wishes from my friends because I'm staying with my friends. only ("Only" isn't really a problem here, it just isn't necessary)

No one knew it, everybody went ( or everybody had gone) to the office. One of my friends knew it, and he wished me a happy birthday. I was upset because no one noticed my birthday. I was feeling very bad, I did a lot of work to forget how upset I was.

I received a call from my best friend at noon and she called me to her home. I thought something different but something else happened something else. I thought atleast at least she knew it, but she didn't know it. Even though I spent more than three hours with her she didn't notice it.I was coming back (I'm not sure what you mean) as she was scolding for my mistakes. I asked her "did you forget anything today"? Finally she got to know realized it. She asked for my me apology first then she wished me happy birthday. I noticed that she was so upset but that is not her problem. She was so busy and in tension tense. After evening, I started to receive a call   calls, and everybody wished me happy birthday. They organised the party in the evening and finally they gave me happy happiness and satisfaction. to forgive is a great thing so I forgave everyone.

Good job expressing a variety of emotions

Notes:

When using "They gave me" or "She wished me", you need to include what was given (the direct object)

Examples

She gave. CORRECT

She gave an apple. CORRECT

She gave me an apple. CORRECT

She gave me. INCORRECT

Yesterday's birthday celebration.

Yesterday was my birthday. I got up in the morning, and I was expecting wishes from my friends because I'm staying with my friends. only ("Only" isn't really a problem here, it just isn't necessary)

No one knew it, everybody went ( or everybody had gone) to the office. One of my friends knew it, and he wished me a happy birthday. I was upset because no one noticed my birthday. I was feeling very bad, I did a lot of work to forget how upset I was.

I received a call from my best friend at noon and she called me to her home. I thought something different but something else happened something else. I thought atleast at least she knew it, but she didn't know it. Even though I spent more than three hours with her she didn't notice it.I was coming back (I'm not sure what you mean) as she was scolding for my mistakes. I asked her "did you forget anything today"? Finally she got to know realized it. She asked for my me apology first then she wished me happy birthday. I noticed that she was so upset but that is not her problem. She was so busy and in tension tense. After evening, I started to receive a call   calls, and everybody wished me happy birthday. They organised the party in the evening and finally they gave me happy happiness and satisfaction. to forgive is a great thing so I forgave everyone.

Good job expressing a variety of emotions

Notes:

When using "They gave me" or "She wished me", you need to include what was given (the direct object)

Examples

She gave. CORRECT

She gave an apple. CORRECT

She gave me an apple. CORRECT

She gave me. INCORRECT

Yesterday's birthday celebration.

Yesterday was my birthday. I got up in the morning, and I was expecting wishes from my friends because I'm staying with my friends. only ("Only" isn't really a problem here, it just isn't necessary)

No one knew it, everybody went ( or everybody had gone) to the office. One of my friends knew it, and he wished me a happy birthday. I was upset because no one noticed my birthday. I was feeling very bad, I did a lot of work to forget how upset I was.

I received a call from my best friend at noon and she called me to her home. I thought something different but something else happened something else. I thought atleast at least she knew it, but she didn't know it. Even though I spent more than three hours with her she didn't notice it.I was coming back (I'm not sure what you mean) as she was scolding for my mistakes. I asked her "did you forget anything today"? Finally she got to know realized it. She asked for my me apology first then she wished me happy birthday. I noticed that she was so upset but that is not her problem. She was so busy and in tension tense. After evening, I started to receive a call   calls, and everybody wished me happy birthday. They organised the party in the evening and finally they gave me happy happiness and satisfaction. to forgive is a great thing so I forgave everyone.

Good job expressing a variety of emotions

Notes:

When using "They gave me" or "She wished me", you need to include what was given (the direct object)

Examples

She gave. CORRECT

She gave an apple. CORRECT

She gave me an apple. CORRECT

She gave me. INCORRECT