Wendy
Are these sentences correct? The weather is sunny.I feel warm. I can wear my new clothes. I wear a beautiful dress.I wear shoes on my feet.
21 de jun. de 2024 14:06
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Hello Wendy, Your sentences are grammatically correct. But are you talking about right now, or are you saying that you do things things normally, in general? The present continuous is better for things that we are doing right now. If you meant now, then it should be: The weather is sunny. I feel warm. I can wear my new clothes. I'm wearing a beautiful dress. I'm wearing shoes on my feet. To make this even better, we should use "and" to make longer sentences: The weather is sunny, and I feel warm. I can wear my new clothes. I'm wearing a beautiful dress and I'm wearing shoes on my feet. To improve this more, we could add conjunctions (words like "and") which show the connections between ideas: The weather is sunny, so I feel warm, and I can wear my new clothes. I'm wearing a beautiful dress, and I have new shoes on my feet. Hope that helps!
21 de junio de 2024
The sentences you provided are mostly correct, but they could be improved for clarity and coherence: 1. The weather is sunny. * This sentence is correct and clear. 2. I feel warm. * This sentence is also correct. 3. I can wear my new clothes. * This sentence is grammatically correct, but it could be more specific or connected to the previous sentences for better flow. 4. I wear a beautiful dress. * This sentence is correct, but it would be clearer if it were connected to the previous sentences to show the sequence of events or thoughts. 5. I wear shoes on my feet. * This sentence is grammatically correct but could benefit from better flow with the preceding sentences. Improved Version: To improve clarity and coherence, you could connect these sentences more fluidly: "The weather is sunny, so I feel warm and can finally wear my new clothes, including a beautiful dress. I've also put on my new shoes." This version maintains the sequence of events (sunny weather → feeling warm → wearing new clothes) and connects the thoughts more smoothly.
22 de junio de 2024
I agree with the other comment, however, when writing in English, make sure that there is consistently a space after a period to start a new sentence.
21 de junio de 2024
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