nozima
I was crying a day ago because I was soo tired of being extremely strong all the time. I was too kind to everyone all the time. And I've finally understood that I've spent my so much time to please everyone. And for that I've lost myself a little bit. Now, I'm trying to find that version of me. Between old me and new me i've lost myself. But I'm keeping going. I have to do. The world and people are not always worth you if you're so kind, always here to help, to understand, to give your best, and if you're the most understandable person. You're comfortable to use for them. Ah. But, okay. Never stop being kind for bad people's behaviour. Save your heart.
2 mars 2025 10:07
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I was crying a day ago because I was so tired of having to stay strong all the time. I’ve always been too kind to everyone and I've finally understood that I had spent my too much time to please everyone and because of that I've lost myself a little bit. Now I'm trying to find that version of me that is between the old version of myself and the new one but I have to keep trying. The world and people are not always worth your time if you're too kind and always here to help, to understand or to give your best while being the most understandable person. But some prefer seeing you as commodity rather than an actual friend. Never stop being kind for bad people's behaviour. Save your heart.
2 mars 2025 11:38
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I was crying a day ago because I was soo tired of being extremely strong all the time. I was too kind to everyone all the time. And I've finally understood that I've spent so much of my time trying to please everyone. And for that I've lost myself a little bit. Now, I'm trying to find that version of me again. Between old me and new me i've lost myself. But I'm keeping going. I have to. The world and people are not always worth you if you're so kind, always here to help, to understand, to give your best, and if you're the most understandable person. You're comfortable to use for them. Ah. But, okay. Never stop being kind for bad people's behaviour. Save your heart. What a lovely piece of writing. Well done Nozima.
2 mars 2025 10:14
I was crying a day ago because I was so tired of always having to be strong. I was too kind to everyone, all the time. And I finally realized that I had spent so much of my life trying to please others that I lost a part of myself along the way. Now, I’m trying to find that version of me again. Somewhere between my old self and my new self, I got lost. But I keep going—I have to. The world and people are not always worthy of you if you are too kind, always ready to help, always understanding, always giving your best. When you are the most understanding person, you become easy to use. Ah. But, okay. Never stop being kind because of bad people’s behavior. Protect your heart.
Tip Your writing is raw and heartfelt, which makes it powerful. To make it even stronger, try to simplify certain sentences so the emotion stands out more clearly. Shorter, more direct sentences can sometimes have a bigger impact. Keep writing from the heart—it’s beautiful.
3 mars 2025 11:04
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