Family Rosary Prayer Group Dear Phil Godbolt. Jr., Phil Godbolt, Sr., or Elizabeth Godbolt, I saw your virtual Gatherings with Zoom and I'm interested in it. is it still open? thank you! blessings, X

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26 mars 2025 02:53

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Subject: Family Rosary Prayer Group Dear Phil Godbolt Jr., Phil Godbolt Sr., or Elizabeth Godbolt, I saw your virtual gatherings on Zoom, and I’m very interested in joining. Is it still open? Thank you! Blessings, [X]

1. “virtual Gatherings with Zoom” → “virtual gatherings on Zoom” • “Gatherings” doesn’t need to be capitalized. • “With Zoom” sounds awkward; “on Zoom” is more natural. 2. “I’m interested in it. is it still open?” → “I’m very interested in joining. Is it still open?” • “Interested in it” is vague; “interested in joining” is clearer. • “Is” should be capitalized as it starts a new sentence.

27 mars 2025 04:50

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