Adejoke Azeez
Today, after i woke up, i pray ,eat and wash my dishes afterwards i went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while after waking up and shower and took a short trip to my elder sister place cause we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
24 mai 2022 22:14
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Casey1
Today, after i✓ woke up, i
pray → pray ,ed
eat and wash my dishes→ afterwards i went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while after waking up and shower and took a short trip to
wash → washed
after waking up and shower
→ ... and showerING
my elder sister place
→ my elder sister'S place cause
we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow
→ we... HAVE a plan to go to the market tomorrow
If you say you "had" a plan, I understand that you no longer have this plan.
It would be best to break this post up into at least three different sentences using punctuation.
...En savoir plus
25 mai 2022
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Casey
we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow → we... HAVE a plan to go to the market tomorrow (If you say you "had" a plan, I understand that you no longer have this plan.)
25 mai 2022 · Répondre
Casey
It would be best to break this post up into at least three different sentences using punctuation.
25 mai 2022 · Répondre
italki English
Today, after iI woke up, i pray ,eed, ate and washed my dishes afterwards i, I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while a. After waking up, I took and shower and took a short trip tovisited my elder sister place because we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
25 mai 2022
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CaseyToday, after iI woke up, iI pray ,eed, ate and washed my dishes a. Afterwards iI went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while a. After waking up and shower and ing I took a short trip to my eolder sister's place , because we both had a plan to go the market together tomorrow.
Here is another try to do it in the way which italki expects.
25 mai 2022
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