Hi everyone I’m writing about my hometown which is Tokyo in Japan. As you know, Tokyo is a densely populated place. Recently many people have been moving there for their work and study. There are so

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Yoshihiro

Hi everyone I’m writing about my hometown which is Tokyo in Japan. As you know, Tokyo is a densely populated place. Recently many people have been moving there for their work and study. There are so many opportunities to get experience. For instance, I’d say it is having food. You have a lot of choices to go restaurants if you live in Tokyo. They have French restaurants, Izakaya and Ramen shops so you could go out to eat whatever you want. I hope you have a chance to visit Tokyo someday. Best Regards, Yoshi

28 févr. 2022 02:28

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Hi everyone I’m writing about my hometown which is Tokyo in Japan. As you know, Tokyo is a densely populated place. Recently many people have been moving there for their work and study. There are so many opportunities to experience new things. For instance, eating food. You have a lot of choices to go restaurants if you live in Tokyo. They have French restaurants, Izakaya and Ramen shops so you could go out to eat whatever you want. I hope you have a chance to visit Tokyo someday. Best Regards, Yoshi

Your English is very well written. I just made a few changes to make the sentences flow better. When you mention 'get experience' that is normally used when you are trying to describe having the opportunity to gain knowledge and skills on how to do something, therefore, 'experiencing new things' fits better in this context. This is really good though your grammar and spelling is perfect! I really hope I get a chance to go to Tokyo.

28 février 2022

Hi everyone I’m writing about my hometown which is Tokyo in Japan. As you know, Tokyo is a densely populated place. Recently, many people have been moving there for their work and study. There are so many opportunities to gain experience. For instance, I’d say it is having meals. You have a lot of choices to go restaurants if you live in Tokyo. They have French restaurants, Izakaya and Ramen shops so you could go out to eat whatever you want. I hope you have a chance to visit Tokyo someday. Best Regards, Yoshi

28 février 2022

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