Hilin Roman
Help me, please!Are there any grammar mistakes in these sentences? I work as a CNC operator at a factory. I operate a CNC laser cutting  machine. I am responsible for cutting and engraving of metal. I also oversee the work of the machine keeping it on track and fixing it when it break. Before I start cutting or engraving of metal I download a program. Then I load the raw materials into the hopper and begin the procces. When the piece is complete  I pull it out of the machine and check it carefully to make sure it is been handled just perfectly. Throughout my workday, i listen for humming, shrieking, or other strange noises from my machine. These sounds could indicate that a screw is coming loose or the equipment is simply too hot and needs a  break. If something goes terribly wrong, i’ll see a coded help signal pop up on the display screen, and i’ll know what to do to fix the problem and get the machine back up and running
1 mai 2017 16:40
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These sounds could indicate that a screw something is coming loose or the equipment is simply too hot and needs a  break to cool down If something goes terribly wrong, I’ll see a coded help signal pop up on the display screen, and I’ll know what to do to fix the problem and get the machine back up and running.
1 mai 2017
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I work as a CNC operator at a factory. I operate a CNC laser cutting  machine. I am responsible for cutting and engraving of metal. I also oversee the work of the machine, keeping it on track and fixing it when if it breaks down. Before I start cutting or engraving of the metal, I download a program. Then I load the raw materials into the hopper and begin the proccess. When the piece is complete  I pull take it out of the machine and check it carefully to make sure it is been handled just perfectly produced correctly. Throughout my workday, i I listen for humming, shrieking, or other strange unusual noises from my machine. 
1 mai 2017
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You should probably do these things in the notebook, but I can help you. 

I work as a CNC operator at a factory. I operate a CNC laser cutting machine. I am responsible for cutting and engraving of metal. I also oversee the work of the machine and keeping it on track and fixing it if when it breaks. Before I start cutting or engraving of metal, I download a program. Then I load the raw materials into the hopper and begin the procces. When the piece is complete, I pull it out of the machine, and check it carefully to make sure it is being handled just perfectly. Throughout my workday, I listen for humming, shrieking, or other strange noises from my machine. These sounds could indicate that a screw is coming loose or the equipment is simply too hot and needs a  break. If something goes terribly wrong, i’ll see a coded help signal pop up on the display screen, and I’ll know what to do how to fix the problem and get the machine back up and running.

1 mai 2017
thank you all very much!!!
2 mai 2017

Thanks a lot!!


1 mai 2017