Are my sentences error-free? Please help me upgrade them.
live-streaming
造句:In China, netizens’ interest in watching live-streaming videos has gone to a new level. As a result, talented common people have <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">to </s>the chance to cash in on this industry <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">by being host</s>. Their revenues are mainly from advertising or virtual gifts given by their fans.
"cash in" is a compound verb, and then can take the preposition "on" when ... it is some sort of activity.
Example: The Dow-Jones is sure to keep going down, I need to cash in my shares.
Example: I need to cash in on the Pokemon craze. What? I'm too late?
Host is a technical internet/computer term, or in media it is the interviewer on a show with one or more guests.
You could say "... by becoming video stars".
lectures delivered by
造句:Last weekend, I listened to a lecture delivered by a prestigious professor majoring in Quantum physics.
remote learning
造句:Although remote learning is time-efficient, as students don’t have to commute to a brick and mortar classroom, they miss out on the opportunity of bonding <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">a peer relationship</s> with their classmates.
"of bonding with their classmates."
"of forming peer relationships with their classmates." I like this one most.
"of peer relationships with their classmates."
"of bonding through peer relationships with their classmates."
naughtiness
造句:It is impossible to remove naughtiness from children’s nature, in order to forge a perfect kid.
cold-call
造句:Mobile phone users are plagued by cold-calls from unknown companies of real estate, insurance and language training, etc. This<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);"> is </s> has resulted from illegal disclosure of personal information.
place more emphasis on
造句:The government should place more emphasis on human rights rather than simply pursuing economic progress<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">ion</s>.
Progress is the usual word here. Progression would be referring to ... perhaps ... an idealogical context where a society moves through a series of steps - and the government focus is on moving through the steps. Progress is usually just a catch word for more money though it could mean a lot more.
how students perform in classroom discussions
造句 :The GPA of undergraduates is determined by their final exam results and how they perform in classroom discussions.
video-conferencing
造句:Thanks to fast internet speeds, the technology of video-conferencing allows local companies and their overseas branches to<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);"> generate meetings</s> meet in real time.
are no excuse for shirking
造句:Breaking up with your ex-wife is no excuse for shirking your responsibility for your daughter.
connections are too wobbly for video calls
造句:Connections were too wobbly for video calls, so we had a voice call instead.
parental supervision
造句:<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">Lack</s> Due to lack of parental supervision, the teenagers are involved in the conflicts between gangs.
The "the" is dependent on context. Are a specific group of teenagers being talked about, use "the". All teenagers in general, no "the".
The sentence needed a "because of a" or "due to" or something at the beginning, to link the initial idea to the consequences.
is entitled
造句:She is entitled to a paid holiday after <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">getting so many dollars brought</s> bringing in so many dollars for <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">to</s> her boss.
Lots of ways the final phrase could have been worded. "for" is required for most of them.
Good work once again. Lots of sentences were perfect.