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THE DESCRIPTION OF A famous PERSON The person I am going to describe in these few lines is a famous woman. She lives in her hometown, Los Angeles from United States of America. This celebrity is worldwide known, mainly because almost all the films she has played on tend to be blockbusters. Her physical appearance is striking, due to her slim body shape. In fact, her height is 173 cm and she barely weights 55 kg. The most remarkable things of hers would be; her thick and glossy lips and her green expressive eyes. Personally, she is a good-hearted woman. Actually, she raises and donates a huge amount of money to charities. In addition, she takes part in many campaigns fighting for the rights of unfortunate people. To finish with, she has recently got married to one of the most handsome man in Hollywood. Moreover, they are parents of six children.
24 sept. 2014 17:34
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     The person I am going to describe in these few lines is a famous woman. She lives in her hometown <em>of</em> Los Angeles, <em>California,</em> United States of America. This celebrity is known worldwide, mainly because almost <em>all of her films are</em> blockbusters.
     Her physical appearance is striking, due to her slim body shape. In fact, her height is 173 cm and she barely weights 55 kg. <em>Her</em> most remarkable <em>attributes are</em> her thick and glossy lips and her green, expressive eyes.
     Personally, she is a good-hearted woman. She <em>actually </em>raises and donates huge <em>amounts</em> of money to charities. In addition, she takes part in many campaigns fighting for the rights of unfortunate people.
<em>     She has recently married one</em> of the most handsome <em>men</em> in Hollywood. Moreover, they are <em>the </em>parents of six children.

25 septembre 2014
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