Essay "My future profession"

I began to think about my future profession a long time ago. A profession depends largely on the nature of a person. I selected the speciality of a public servant, which was a responsible decision. A person working in this field has to be pretty serious, attentive, focused and organized. He or she should be able to find the right approach [when talking] to people, know what would be better for them and try to meet the needs of the individual and society as a whole. I try to cultivate these qualities, as well as on a moral and spiritual basis, which is fundamental for professionals in the civil service. A future job should be interesting and a person should like it, because this is an important part of happiness in life. State and municipal management is a relatively new specialty in the market of educational services.
Being a civil servant is a prestigious and stable occupation. It provides long-term employment and career growth, depending on the contribution of individual. It is a wide field for creative activity; there will be an opportunity to express yourself and demonstrate an unconventional mindset, because at the moment transformations take place in the sphere of state and municipal management. Today, the profession of a civil servant is marked by every third man as an attractive one, and by every second person - as a prestigious one.
The recognition of the rights and freedoms of a citizen is the highest value of the modern state, therefore, the profession of a civil servant assumes the recognition and observance of these rights as the first of its responsibilities. Choosing this career, I understand that I should serve the interests of civil society first and foremost. I really want to find myself, get pleasure from my job , and, in exchange, sincere gratitude for my work.

Where I have put 'first and foremost' - if you meant that serving the interests of civil society is the most important thing, 'first and foremost' makes more sense here.

This is a really great piece of writing though, hardly any mistakes. Well done :)