Wendy
Could you check my text please?
Do you know about AI? It is getting super
cool! This year, I saw robots dance yangko on TV! They spun red handkerchiefs perfectly. I used to think only humans could do that!
Now, robots aren’t just dancing. They help make toys , do housework and even help with homework! It’s amazing, but I also worry: Will robots take our jobs one day?
But don’t worry! Robots are tools we invented, like pencils or computers. If we keep learning and stay curious, we’ll always be their "teachers." Let’s study hard and use AI to help us, not replace us!
2025년 2월 14일 오전 3:44
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Could you check my text please?
"Do you know about AI? It’s getting super cool! This year, I saw robots dancing Yangko on TV! They spun red handkerchiefs perfectly. I used to think only humans could do that!
Now, robots aren’t just dancing—they’re helping make toys, doing housework, and even assisting with homework! It’s amazing, but I also worry: Will robots take our jobs one day?
But don’t worry! Robots are tools we invented, like pencils or computers. If we keep learning and stay curious, we’ll always be their 'teachers.' Let’s study hard and use AI to help us, not replace us!"
Corrections & Explanations: 1. "Dance yangko" → "dancing Yangko" - "Yangko" is a type of dance, so you need "dancing" instead of "dance." Also, capitalize "Yangko" since it’s a proper noun. 2. "They help make toys , do housework" → "They’re helping make toys, doing housework" - Removed the unnecessary space before the comma. - Changed "help make" to "helping make" for parallel structure with "doing housework." 3. "Help with homework" → "assisting with homework" - "Assist" sounds a bit more formal and varied, which improves flow. 4. "We’ll always be their 'teachers.'" - Kept the quotation marks, which is a nice touch to emphasize the metaphor. Tip: Your writing style is engaging and natural! To make it even smoother, focus on parallel structure (keeping verb forms consistent in lists). Here, "helping," "doing," and "assisting" create a balanced rhythm.
2025년 2월 14일 오전 9:08
Could you check my text please? Do you know about AI? It is getting super cool!
This year, I saw robots dance yangko on TV! They spun red handkerchiefs
perfectly. I used to think only humans could do that! Now, robots aren’t just
dancing. They help make toys , do housework and even help with homework! It’s
amazing, but I also worry: Will robots take our jobs one day? But I think we shouldn't worry!
Robots are tools we invented, like pencils or computers. If we keep learning and
stay curious, we’ll always be their "teachers." Let’s study hard and use AI to
help us, not replace us!
Oh, AI creates more jobs than it takes away.
2025년 2월 14일 오전 7:46
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