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On a personal note, I preferred to let the heavy rain passed before going home or doing errands. Rain can be calming at times but at its extreme level -this can posed danger specially on the roads. However, if can’t be helped the needs to go out or got caught in the rain on the way home I would choose to use transportation apps. In that way it would be convenient.
2025년 4월 3일 오후 2:34
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On a personal note, I preferred to let the heavy rain passed before going home or doing errands. Rain can be calming at times but at its extreme level -this can posed danger specially on the roads. However, if can’t be helped the needs to go out or got caught in the rain on the way home I would choose to use transportation apps. In that way it would be convenient.On a personal note, I prefer to wait for the heavy rain to pass before going home or running errands. Rain can be calming at times, but when it’s extreme, it can pose a danger—especially on the roads. However, if going out is unavoidable or I get caught in the rain on my way home, I choose to use transportation apps. That way, it’s more convenient.
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On a personal note, I prefer to let the heavy rain pass before going home or doing errands. Rain can be calming at times but at its extreme level -this can pose danger especially on the roads. However, if I need to go out or I get caught in the rain on the/my way home, I would choose to use transportation apps. That would be more convenient.
2025년 4월 3일 오후 2:43
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On a personal note, I prefer to let the heavy rain pass before going home or doing errands. Rain can be calming at times. However at an extreme level, it can pose a danger while navigating on roads. However, I would still choose to use transportation apps. I can still move around while at my leisure.
I removed un needed wordage and fixed some basic grammatical errors. It’s subjective, but I would say it like this.
2025년 4월 3일 오후 2:40
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