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Creation Day 4. God created lights in the sky. The sun, moon, and stars are made by him. I can walk the street in the night because he give me a twilight. If the world is without lights, I cannot walk and write something down, and see the faces of my favorite persons like my mother, and friends. So I appreciate him that I can spend a good time on my favorite things and doing anything freely (without worrying) in the day and night. What is the most grateful things that you have lights?
2024년 10월 4일 오전 10:47
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Creation Day 4. God created lights in the sky. The sun, moon, and stars are made by him. I can walk the street at night because he gave me the twilight. If the world would be without light, I couldn't walk and write something down, and see the faces of my favorite people, like my mother and my friends. So I appreciate him so that I can spend a quality time on my favorite things, doing anything freely (without worrying) day and night. What is the most grateful things that you have lights?
doing anything freely (without worrying) day and night / being at ease day and night // person - plural is - people
2024년 10월 4일 오후 3:18
Creation Day 4. God created lights in the sky. The sun, moon, and stars were made by him. I can walk the street in the night because he give me twilight. If the world was without lights, I couldn't walk and write something down, and see the faces of my favorite persons like my mother and my friends. So I am grateful to him that I can spend a good time on my favorite things and do anything freely (without worrying) whether in the day or night. What is the most grateful things that you have apart from lights?
I tried to add more meaning to what you wrote, I hope I didn't change the meaning
2024년 10월 5일 오전 7:05
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