Cherry
I got my new hair cut yesterday. I feel like it’s brand new me but it seems like most people around me doesn’t think so. The topic about my hair style was never talked today. I don’t care. I like my new hair style.
2023년 5월 30일 오후 12:18
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I got my new haircut yesterday. I feel like it’s a brand new me but it seems like most people around me don’t think so. No one mentioned/noticed my hair style today. I don’t care. I like my new hair style.
Haircut is one word. If you say you got 'a hair cut', that means you had ONE hair that got cut. Not a huge deal though - many native speakers would probably make the same mistake. PEOPLE is plural.
2023년 5월 31일
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I got my new hair cut yesterday. I feel like it’s brand new me but it seems like most people around me doesn’t think so. The topic about my hair style was never talked today. I don’t care. I like my new hair style.
hello
can we practice together?
2023년 5월 30일
I got a new hair cut yesterday. I feel like a brand new-person but it seems most people around me doesn’t think so. TNobody even mentioned my hair. I don’t care though. I like my new hair style.
Very good. I changed two of your sentences just to make them sound more natural.
2023년 5월 30일
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