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I need to introduce myself in a work meeting, and I want my presentation to sound as natural as possible. Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. As many of you are aware, my name is Jhon , and I currently hold the position of Program Manager,. I have been with the company for 14 years. I began my career as a Strategic Business in 2009 , and subsequently joined the program Department in 2011. Due to Sam's health conditions, my colleagues and I have assumed additional responsibilities within the department and we also now overseeing the tasks previously managed by Sam My new role enables me to grow professionally and provides the opportunity to collaborate closely with esteemed colleagues like yourselves
2025년 4월 17일 오전 6:53
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I need to introduce myself in a work meeting, and I want my presentation to sound as natural as possible. Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. As many of you are aware, my name is Jhon , and I currently hold the position of Program Manager,. I have been with the company for 14 years. I began my career as a Strategic Business in 2009 , and subsequently joined the program Department in 2011. Due to Sam's health conditions, my colleagues and I have assumed additional responsibilities within the department and we also now overseeing the tasks previously managed by Sam My new role enables me to grow professionally and provides the opportunity to collaborate closely with esteemed colleagues like yourselves
This is really nice, Simon has picked everything there.
2025년 4월 17일 오전 8:08
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I need to introduce myself in a work meeting, and I want my presentation to sound as natural as possible. Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. As many of you are aware, my name is Jhon , and I currently hold the position of Program Manager,. I have been with the company for 14 years. I began my career as a Strategic Business NEEDS ANOTHER WORD HERE JOSÉ in 2009 , and subsequently joined the PROGRAMMING DEPARTMENT in 2011. Due to Sam's health conditions, my colleagues and I have assumed additional responsibilities within the department and we also now OVERSEE the tasks HE previously managed. My new role IS ENABLING me to grow professionally and provides the opportunity to collaborate closely with esteemed colleagues like yourselves Nice one José. It’s fluent and well written. Hope my suggestions can help you too. Good luck. Simon
2025년 4월 17일 오전 7:25
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