Obed Orozco
If life had some sort of porpuse, with doutb i would like to record all what i have inside of me, all those musical ideas that are in my head that dosent let me sleep well.
2023년 5월 4일 오후 10:31
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If life had some sort of purpose, without doubt I would like to record everything I have inside of me, all those musical ideas in my head that don't let me sleep well.
2023년 5월 5일
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If life had some sort of purpose, without a doubt, I would like to record all of what i
have inside of me, all of those musical ideas that are in my head that don't let me sleep well.
En mi opinión creo que tu inglés si esta bien pero había muchas problemas con tu escritura en unas palabras, para mejorar tu escritura considera practicando vocabulario por lo menos 2 o 3 veces a la semana pero tu trabajo esta bien 👏👏👏
2023년 5월 4일
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