Jiwang Seung
buy birthday cake→go to somebody's home/go to the restaurant→celebrate birthday
celebrate birthday：
•light the candles（show age）
•sing the birthday song
•make a wish
•blow out the candles
•give somebody gifts
•eat longevity noodles（birthday noodles）
•eat birthday cake
2022년 1월 31일 오전 6:10
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buy birthday cake→go to somebody's home/go to the restaurant→celebrate birthday
celebrate birthday：
•light the candles（show age）
•sing the birthday song
•make a wish
•blow out the candles
•give somebody gifts
•eat longevity noodles（birthday noodles）
•eat birthday cake
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2022년 1월 31일
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