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They lack the ability of self-discipline. So it’s a problem for them to control the time of being online. They are easy to overuse the phone if we don’t remind them
2022년 1월 31일 오후 11:33
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They lack self-discipline. So it’s a problem for them to control their time spent being online. It is easy for them to overuse the phone if we don’t remind them
Nice work, just a few minor corrections.
2022년 2월 1일
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