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It was a sunny day today. The traffic was really heavy and congested. It turned out today was the local traditional autumn parade. The floats and processions were taking up the roads and blocking traffic. It's a shame I didn't know about it earlier. My dad declined the idea of attending the parade. He's been it before and said the real highlight of the parade isn't the floats or dancing routines, but the density of the crowds. We'd probably get crushed, so we'll stay home and watch it on telly.
2024년 11월 2일 오후 12:15
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It was a sunny day today. The traffic was really heavy and congested. It turned out that today was the local traditional autumn parade. The floats and processions were taking up the roads and blocking traffic. It's a shame I didn't know about it earlier. My dad declined the idea of attending the parade. He's been to one before and said the real highlight of the parade isn't the floats or dancing routines, but the density of the crowds. We'd probably get crushed, so we'll stay home and watch it on telly.
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2024년 11월 2일 오후 1:54
It was a sunny day today. The traffic was really heavy and congested. It turned out that today was the local traditional autumn parade. The floats and processions were taking up the roads and blocking traffic. It's a shame I didn't know about it earlier. My dad declined the idea of attending the parade. He's seen it before and said the real highlight of the parade isn't the floats or dancing routines, but the density of the crowds. We'd probably get crushed, so we'll stay home and watch it on telly.
2024년 11월 2일 오후 9:42
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