Louis
My favorite hoppy is playing basketball, when I was young , I was dreaming of being a professional basketball player, but then I just found out it was hard to reach that goal.
2020년 11월 30일 오후 2:55
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My favorite hobby is playing basketball, when I was young , I dreamed of being a professional basketball player, but then I just found out that it is hard to reach that goal.
2020년 12월 2일
My favorite hobby is playing basketball. When I was young, I dreamt of being a professional basketball player. But then I found out it was hard to reach that goal.
Few mistakes in grammar but otherwise good job.👍
2020년 12월 1일
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