Akram Alwajih
1- what the best 1 or 2?
2 - 2 use tense correctly?
1
"Spent the day exploring a new city and discovering hidden gems. Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons!
2
I have spent today explored new city and explored hide treasures .
The traveling is best way to expanding your mind
2023년 11월 17일 오후 7:00
답변 · 4
1
There are grammar and punctuation mistakes in the second one. Also, it is ambiguous a bit. But the first one is correct.
2023년 11월 17일
1 is good but kind of informal without the subject. Just add 'I' at the beginning if it's for a more official writing style.
2. has a lot of errors, as the other correction said.
2023년 11월 18일
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