Isabella
Cream puff looks so cute. His body is enormous, too big for his head. But that did not stop him from being the cutest kitten I have ever saw in my entire life. He had brown and white fur, huge yellowish glow-in-the-dark eyes, pink nose and a extremely fit body. He still looked like a kitten though, his legs are not as long and strong as ordinary cats and his actions are those of a child’s. He cuddled with us sometimes.
2022년 5월 1일 오후 2:30
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Cream puff looks so cute. His body is enormous, too big for his head. But that
does not stop him from being the cutest kitten I have ever seen in my entire life.
He has brown and white fur, huge yellowish glow-in-the-dark eyes, a pink nose and
an extremely fit body. He still looks like a kitten though, his legs are not as
long and strong as those of ordinary cats and his actions are those of a child. He
cuddles us sometimes.
Great. You were writing mostly in the past so I thought he might be dead! I hope not.
2022년 5월 2일
Cream puff looks so cute. His body is enormous, too big for his head. But that does not stop him from being the cutest kitten I have ever seen in my entire life. He has brown and white fur, huge yellowish glow-in-the-dark eyes, a pink nose and an extremely fit body. He still looks like a kitten though; (semicolon) his legs are not as long and strong as ordinary cats' (possessive apostrophe, or put "as those of ordinary cats") and his actions are those of a child (not possessive) (a child, or a kitten?). He cuddles with us sometimes.
Great job, Isabella! The possessives were rather tricky, so it wouldn’t be unusual for native speakers to get them wrong (although you wouldn’t want to do so on a college entrance exam).
2022년 5월 2일
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