Ann
Dear Harry,
Our important client MOD company hasn’t received the papers . The order number is SF001, it contains 200 copies of financial statements, please check the reason for the failure, and resend it as early as possible.
Best wishes
Ann
2023년 9월 13일 오전 7:45
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Dear Harry, One of our major clients, MOD Limited, hasn’t received their delivery. The
order number is SF001 and it contains 200 copies of their financial statements. Please
check the reason for the failure and resend it as soon as possible.
Ann
Your email only contained 37 words. You need to count them as you will lose marks if there aren’t enough. Try to vary the vocabulary in the question- use major or another similar word instead of important.
2023년 9월 13일
Dear Harry, Our important client MOD company hasn’t received the papers. The
order number is SF001, and it contains 200 copies of financial statements, Please
check the reason for the failure, and resend it as early as possible. Best
wishes Ann
2023년 9월 13일
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