Joanna
When it comes to preferred kind of transportation while traveling, I will base my decision on the distance of the journey. For weekend trips, I prefer to drive myself to the seaside or the mountains near my city. For short trips between domestic cities, I like to take the train, because it is affordable and provides me the landscape outside. For long domestic trips or international travel, I prefer to air travel. However, I can't stand the distance of the airport from my home. I have to arrive at least an hour in advance to prepare for boarding. Nevertheless, it is worth experiencing different cultures.
2024년 11월 20일 오전 6:40
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When choosing my preferred mode of transportation for traveling, I base my decision on the distance of the journey. For weekend getaways, I enjoy driving myself to the seaside or the mountains near my city. For short trips between domestic cities, I prefer taking the train because it’s affordable and allows me to enjoy the scenic landscapes along the way. For longer domestic journeys or international travel, I usually opt for air travel. However, I dislike how far the airport is from my home and the need to arrive at least an hour early for boarding. Even so, the chance to experience different cultures makes it all worthwhile.
"Mode" is more natural for transportation, and "for traveling" is more concise / "Getaways" adds a touch of vibrancy and suggests relaxation or adventure / "Opt for" sounds smoother and fits the context better /
2024년 11월 20일 오전 9:44
When it comes to preferred kind of transportation while traveling, (maybe we could say “when it comes to my preferred transportation when I’m travelling) I will base my decision on the distance of the journey. For weekend trips, I prefer to drive myself to the seaside or the mountains near my city. For short trips between domestic cities, I like to take the train, because it is affordable and provides me/ I can see/enjoy the landscape outside. For long domestic trips or international travel, I prefer air travel. However, I can't stand the distance the airport is from my home. I have to arrive at least an hour in advance to prepare for boarding. Nevertheless, it is worth experiencing different cultures. Well done Joanna. A really nice piece of writing. Hope my suggestions and corrections are helpful. Keep writing! Simon
2024년 11월 20일 오전 7:53
When it comes to preferred kind of transportation while traveling, I will base my decision on the distance of the journey. For weekend trips, I prefer to drive myself to the seaside or the mountains near my city. For short trips between domestic cities, I like to take the train, because it is affordable and provides me the landscape outside. For long domestic trips or international travel, I prefer to air travel. However, I can't stand the distance of the airport from my home. I have to arrive at least an hour in advance to prepare for boarding. Nevertheless, it is worth experiencing different cultures.
2024년 11월 20일 오전 7:37
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