hanna
Yesterday, I went to the farm which I wanted to go few months ago. The farm is soo big. The farm is famous for gerato so, I ate it. I choosed macadamia vanilla flavor. It was very delicious. If I go there next time, I wanna eat it one more time. The farm has cows and horses, sheep and chicken. Sheeps are grazing so, I could touch them. I've never touched sheep's wool before. It was hard to touch that I thought. I also went to the cowshed. Normally you can't get that close to a cow so, this was very valuable experience. This farm is soo far to my house. This time, my friend took me there. It took about 1hour by car. My friend have a her car so, she sometimes took me somewhere. She is my high school friend so, it been a while before we met. Last time, it was febuary. We talked a lot of things. Me and my friends were same class in final year so, we made a lot of memories. When I was third year of high school, we oftee organized snack party almost everyday. We bought some doughnuts and snacks and more. It was happy to go to school. I sometimes want to back these days but, now I'm super happy to see my friends and I love my friends so, I wanna make more memories with them. them.
2022년 12월 8일 오후 11:31
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Yesterday I went to the farm that I had wanted to go to a few months ago. This farm is very big and is famous for gelato, so I had some. I chose vanilla macadamia flavor and it was quite delicious. If I go there another time I would like to eat it again. The farm has cows and horses, sheep and chickens. The sheep were grazing and I could touch them. I'd never touched a sheep's wool before. It was stiffer to the touch that I thought it would be. I also went to the cowshed. Normally you can't get that close to cows so this was a very valuable experience. This farm is very far from my house and this time my friend took me there. It took about one hour by car. My friend has a car so she sometimes takes me places. She is a high school friend so we have known each other for awhile. The previous time we went on a trip was in February. We talk about a lot of things on our trips. My friend and I were in the same class in our final year so we made a lot of memories together. For example, we organized snack parties, buying doughnuts and other snacks, almost every day. I was happy in school and I sometimes want to go back to those days. But now I am super happy to see my old friends. I love them and want to make more memories with them.
2022년 12월 9일
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Yesterday, I went to the farm that I wanted to go to a few months ago. The farm is so big. The farm is famous for gelato, so I ate it. I chose macadamia vanilla flavor. It was very delicious. Next time I go there, I want to eat it again. The farm has cows, horses, sheep, and chickens. The sheep were grazing, so I could touch them. I've never touched a sheep's wool before. It was rougher than I thought. I also went to the cowshed. Normally you can't get that close to a cow, so this was a very valuable experience. This farm is so far from my house. This time, my friend took me there. It took about 1 hour by car. My friend has a car, so sometimes she takes me places. She is my high school friend, so it had been a while since the last time we met. Last time, it was Febuary. We talked about a lot of things. My friends and I were in the same class in our final year, so we made a lot of memories. When I was in my third year of high school, we organized snack parties almost every day. We bought some doughnuts and snacks and more. It was happy to go to school [for this sentence, I would recommend - "High school was a happy time," or "I enjoyed high school"). I sometimes want to go back to these days, but now I'm super happy to see my friends and I love my friends, so I want to make more memories with them.
Great job! Sounds like a wonderful day at the farm :) I have one near my house that I like to visit sometimes.
2022년 12월 9일
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