李梦桐
What is your background in Tibetan Buddhism or in any other Buddhist tradition?
I read about Buddhism. I started with the Theravāda. I travel during school holidays and have stayed in different monasteries, such as Wat Prayong International Meditation Center and Wat Pah Nanachat since spiritual life is important to me. My CELT-P (Certificate in English Language Teaching – Primary) trainer introduced Tara Mandala to me and I went there. I was given the book Feeding Your Demons. I brought it to China and gave it to my trainer. she studied Zen in Japan. before my grandmother passed away in the hospital, she still chanted “Amitabha Buddha” three times with an oxygen mask and many other devices. she didn't know the meaning because she was illiterate. But we can see how deep Buddhism goes in our culture.
2025년 3월 28일 오전 4:49
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What is your background in Tibetan Buddhism or in any other Buddhist tradition?
I read about Buddhism and started with Theravāda. I travel during school holidays and have stayed in different monasteries, such as Wat Prayong International Meditation Center and Wat Pah Nanachat, since spiritual life is important to me. My CELT-P (Certificate in English Language Teaching – Primary) trainer introduced me to Tara Mandala, and I went there. I was given the book Feeding Your Demons, which I brought to China and gave to my trainer, who studied Zen in Japan. Before my grandmother passed away in the hospital, she still chanted ‘Amitabha Buddha’ three times while using an oxygen mask and many other devices. She didn’t know the meaning because she was illiterate, but we can see how deeply Buddhism is rooted in our culture.
1. “I started with the Theravāda” → “I started with Theravāda”
• Removed “the” as it is not needed when referring to Buddhist traditions in general.
2. “she studied Zen in Japan” → “who studied Zen in Japan”
• Corrected to “who” to properly link the relative clause to the trainer.
3. “before my grandmother passed away” → “Before my grandmother passed away”
• Capitalized the first letter for proper sentence structure.
4. “she still chanted “Amitabha Buddha” three times with an oxygen mask and many other devices” → “she still chanted ‘Amitabha Buddha’ three times while using an oxygen mask and many other devices”
• Reworded for clarity and smoother sentence flow.
5. “she didn’t know the meaning because she was illiterate. But we can see how deep Buddhism goes in our culture.” → “She didn’t know the meaning because she was illiterate, but we can see how deeply Buddhism is rooted in our culture.”
• Reworded to make the phrasing sound more natural and meaningful.
2025년 3월 29일 오후 5:13
What is your background in Tibetan Buddhism or in any other Buddhist tradition?
I read about Buddhism, starting with the Theravāda. I like to travel during school
holidays, so I've stayed in different monasteries, such as (the) Wat Prayong International Meditation Center and (the) Wat Pah Nanachat, since spiritual life is important to me. My CELT-P (Certificate in English Language Teaching – Primary) trainer introduced Tara Mandala to me, and I went there. I was given the book Feeding Your Demons. I brought it to China and gave it to my trainer, who studied Zen in Japan.
Before my grandmother passed away in the hospital, she still chanted “Amitabha Buddha” three times with an oxygen mask and many other
devices. She didn't know what is meant because she was illiterate, but you can see how deep Buddhism goes in our culture.
Good job! It was really interesting to learn about your background in Buddhism.
Some of your sentences were perfect grammatically but didn't sound very natural, so I made some slight edits to make your writing a bit more natural.
2025년 3월 28일 오전 5:58
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