Anzhela
Can you correct please? Write about a person who influenced you the most . It sounds strange but person who influenced me the most was my neighbor. I mean it’s weird that it was a man, not a woman. I was raised by just only one parent, my mom. I didn’t spend a lot of time with her because she had to work a lot and I don’t have any man around me, I mean I don’t have brothers. I always want to have an older brother. Maybe that’s why my neighbor who named Aleksei was the person which I looked up to. Actually I lived( grew up) in a small town. In this town we don’t have any sections, courses( секции, кружки) to attend. We didn’t even have any gym at that time so Aleksei tried to open his own gym in a small room with a bit equipment. But it was so cool. Everybody wanted to see this room and tried to do some exercises. Aleksei worked out very often. So he looked very strong and handsome as well. But he didn’t just look very well he also was a smart (intelligent) man. I remember he worked at the foreign company so he had to know English for work. We lived on the ninth floor so we often met while lifting to home. He talked to me in a kind and polite way. I called him “дядя Леша- uncle Lesha» and he always smiled at me. His mom was a strong and strict woman. She has 4 sons but only дядя Леша was kind, smart,strong and handsome at the same time. He often told me to learn English and study hard.(well) He improves himself every time in each aspect of his life. I have just realized it I don’t know what happened to him but I want him to be happy (to has a happy life) which he deserves
2024년 9월 28일 오전 5:46
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Can you correct,please? Write about a person who influenced you the most . It sounds strange, but the person who influenced me the most was my neighbor. I mean it’s weird that it was a man, not a woman. I was raised by a single parent, my mom. I didn’t spend a lot of time with her because she had to work a lot and I don’t have any man around me. I mean, I don’t have any brothers. I have always wanted to have an older brother. Maybe that’s why my neighbor, named Aleksei, was the person whom I looked up to. Actually, I lived( grew up) in a small town. In this town we don’t have any sections, courses( секции, кружки) to attend. We didn’t even have any gym at that time, so Aleksei tried to open his own gym in a small room with a bit of equipment. It was so cool. Everybody wanted to see this room and tried to do some exercises. Aleksei worked out very often. So he looked very strong and handsome as well. He didn’t just look very well. He also was a smart (intelligent) man. I remember he worked at a foreign company, so he had to know English for work. We lived on the ninth floor, so we often met while lifting to home. He talked to me in a kind and polite manner. I called him “дядя Леша- uncle Lesha» and he always smiled at me. His mom was a strong and strict woman. She has 4 sons, but only дядя Леша was kind, smart,strong and handsome all at the same time. He often told me to learn English and study hard. He always strived to improve himself in each aspect of his life. I have just realized that I don’t know what happened to him, but I want him to be happy and to have a happy life, which he deserves.
2024년 9월 28일 오전 10:07
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