Yuji
My favorite food is ramen (like Chinese noodle).
In Japan, there are a lot of ramen shops.
My parents love ramen. That’s why I’m into eating ramen. The ramen has several flavors, like miso, soy sauce, porked, and so on.
I like all kinds of ramen, but lately I love light tasted ramens. Because of changing my taste, I feel I’m unpleasant to eat heavy ramens….
2022년 6월 3일 오후 3:17
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My favorite food is ramen and all kinds of noodles, like Chinese noodles.
In Japan, there are a lot of ramen shops.
My parents love ramen. That’s why I’m into eating ramen. Ramen has several flavors, like miso, soy sauce, pork and so on.
I like all kinds of ramen, but lately I love ramen with a light taste. Because of changing my taste, I feel it is unpleasant to eat ramen with a strong taste…
Good job, Yuji! The umbrella term is noodles; ramen refers to a type of Japanese noodles. Colloquially, ramen is commonly used to mean all kinds of noodles in America even though this is not really accurate. Anyway, I'd be happy to help you improve your English. If you're interested, please check out my profile and let me know what you think :)
2022년 6월 4일
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My favorite food is ramen (like Chinese noodles).
In Japan, there are a lot of ramen shops.
My parents love ramen, so that’s why I’m into eating ramen. The ramen broth has several flavors, like miso, soy sauce, pork, and so on.
I like all kinds of ramen, but lately I love lightly flavored ramen. Because of my changing taste, I feel it's unpleasant to eat heavily flavored ramen….
Nice writing practice. Americans love ramen too! 😊 In English, we do not add an "s" to "ramen".
2022년 6월 3일
My favorite food is ramen (like Chinese noodles).
In Japan, there are a lot of ramen shops.
My parents love ramen. That’s why I’m into eating ramen. Ramen has several flavors, like miso, soy sauce, pork and so on.
I like all kinds of ramen, but lately I love light tasting ramen. Because of my change in taste, I feel unpleasant when I eat heavy ramen
Well done Yuji.
2022년 6월 3일
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