I just don't want to go out. Most of the time, I just want to stay at home without communicating. People say I am weird and they say I should go out more but I feel comfortable staying at home. Maybe

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I just don't want to go out. Most of the time, I just want to stay at home without communicating. People say I am weird and they say I should go out more but I feel comfortable staying at home. Maybe I am too self-concious, maybe I am shy or I am boring ... I don't know. I know that I should go out and communicate more and practice less self-concious. Still, I won't change myself being someone who is a homebody.

2024년 10월 16일 오전 3:17

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I just don't want to go out. Most of the time, I just want to stay at home without any communication. People say I am weird and they say I should go out more but I feel comfortable staying at home. Maybe I am too self-concious, maybe I am shy or I am boring ... I don't know. I know that I should go out and communicate more and practice less self-consciousness. Still, I won't change myself and become a homebody.

2024년 10월 16일 오전 11:46

"Going out" just isn't me. Most of the time, I just want to stay at home and communicate with no one. People think me weird, and say I ought to go out more but I feel more comfortable staying home. Maybe I am too timid. Maybe I am bashful or boring. I don't know. I do know that I should go out, communicate, and work on being less introspective. And yet, I know that won't happen so long as I remain a homebody. Other than just two true errors, all my other suggestions are just to show you some nice ways of saying things. The true errors are these: "I should ... practice BEING less self-conscious" "I won't change myself INTO being someone" There is nothing wrong with short sentences like "I don't know". Short sentences can be powerful and to the point. Not every sentence needs to have subordinate clauses or phrases.

2024년 10월 16일 오후 1:08

I just don't want to go out. Most of the time, I just want to stay at home without communicating. People say I am weird and they say I should go out more but I feel comfortable staying at home. Maybe I am too self-concious, maybe I am shy or I am boring ... I don't know. I know that I should go out and communicate more and practice being less self-concious. Still, I won't change myself being someone who is a homebody.

There is nothing wrong with being a homebody. Perhaps look into work from home online as well as joining online groups of people who are like-minded and share your interests. Book clubs and knitting groups and cooking groups and exercise groups, the list of possibilities is long. Your paragraph is well written with one very minor correction 👌. Good luck!

2024년 10월 16일 오전 4:26

I just don't want to go out. Most of the time, I just want to stay at home without communicating with anyone. People say I am weird and they say I should go out more but I feel comfortable staying at home. Maybe I am too self-concious, maybe I am shy or maybe I am just boring ... I don't know. I know that I should go out and communicate more and practice less self-conciousness. Still, I won't change myself by being someone who is a homebody.

I hope this helps and doesn't change the meaning of the sentence

2024년 10월 16일 오전 8:56

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