李梦桐
Do you have any specific skills or hobbies that can enhance your teaching?
I have chances to tutor children and play with them. I love reading and painting. I have a great passion for children's books like Little Prince and Peter Pan. I learn something new every time I read them.
2025년 3월 19일 오전 8:55
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Do you have any specific skills or hobbies that can enhance your teaching?
I have experience tutoring children and playing with them. I love reading and painting. I am passionate about children’s books like The Little Prince and Peter Pan, and I learn something new every time I read them.
“Have chances to tutor” sounds unnatural; “have experience tutoring” is more precise.
“A great passion for” → “Am passionate about”: More natural phrasing.
Combined last two sentences: The original sentence structure was slightly choppy, so I combined them smoothly.
2025년 3월 19일 오후 9:57
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