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Recently, I really wanna go abroad. I had been to Australia once, when I visited there I remember that I was so impressed with different cultures from Japan custom and so on. I want to know and see the world with my own eyes👀Please tell me what countries do you recommend to visit?
2025년 4월 20일 오후 1:31
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Recently, I really want to go abroad. I have been to Australia once. When I visited
there, I remember that I was so impressed with different cultures from Japan
and so on. I want to know and see the world with my own eyes👀Please tell
me what countries do you recommend to visit?
2025년 4월 20일 오후 2:12
Recently, I really want to go abroad. I have been to Australia once, and when I visited, I remember being impressed by the different cultures, including Japanese customs. I want to know and see the world with my own eyes. Please tell me what countries you recommend visiting.
Hi Yui! I love your excitement about traveling and exploring new cultures. You shared a great memory from your trip to Australia, and it shows your curiosity. For improvement, try using the correct verb tenses and ensure your sentences flow better. Keep dreaming big and writing!
2025년 4월 20일 오후 8:12
Recently, I've really been wanting to travel abroad. I went to Australia once and I remember that I was so impressed by the cultural differences between Japanese and Australian customs and so on. I want to know and see the world with my own eyes👀Please tell me what countries do you recommend to visit?
I lived for 4 years in Canada (in Vancouver, BC), it's a nice place to visit.
2025년 4월 20일 오후 2:49
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