ayane
today,my best friennd celebrated my 20th birthday!! I'm so happy!!
But, I don't really fell like I'm 20th yet...
I'll take responsibility for my action and ,I want to be a good adult.
I'll do my best tomorroww!!.!!
2025년 4월 20일 오후 3:44
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Today ,my best friend and I celebrated my 20th birthday!! I'm so happy!!
But I don't really fell like I'm 20 yet...
I'll take responsibilities for my action and I want to be a good adult.
I'll do my best tomorrow!!.!!
Happy birthday.
5시간 전
Today, my best friend celebrated my 20th birthday! I'm so happy! But I don't really feel like I'm 20 yet… I'll take responsibility for my actions, and I want to be a good adult. I'll do my best tomorrow!
Hi Ayane! I really enjoyed reading about your birthday celebration and how you’re feeling. You did a great job expressing your happiness and desire to take responsibility. For improvement, try to focus on using the correct verb forms and double-checking for spelling errors. Keep up the good work!
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