Today’s weather is sunny and cold. Although the sun is shining, the wind is blowing and if you are in a shady place, it is cold. However, in the sun, it is warm and comfortable. I live sunny days. Y

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Patricia

Today’s weather is sunny and cold. Although the sun is shining, the wind is blowing and if you are in a shady place, it is cold. However, in the sun, it is warm and comfortable. I live sunny days. Yesterday, it was a cloudy day and it rained a lot, I am surprised about the weather change between yesterday and today! In rainy days, I love to be at home with hot chocolate, a film and a thick blanket in the sofa! ❤️

2020년 11월 23일 오후 6:46

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Michael Orlando

Today’s weather is sunny and cold. Although the sun is shining, the wind is blowing and if you are in a shady place, it is cold. However, in the sun, it is warm and comfortable. I live for sunny days. Yesterday, it was a cloudy day and it rained a lot,. I am surprised about the weather change between yesterday and today! IOn rainy days, I love to be at home with hot chocolate, a film and a thick blanket ion the sofa! ❤️

Overall it was written very well! I edited it a bit to match a more native way of saying speaking. At the end of your first paragraph you said “I live sunny days.” I’m not sure if you meant to say “I love sunny days” (which would be correct) but I changed it to “I live for sunny days.” To say “I live for....” is an expression used in English (at least in the United States by younger people) to express something you really really like

2020년 11월 23일

Saran

Today’s weather is sunny and cold. Although theThere’s plenty of sun is shining, the wind is blowing and ie and it’s windy. If you are in anear shady place, it ises you feel cold. However, in the sun, it is warm and comfortable. I livke sunny days. Yesterday, it was a cloudy day and it rained a lot, I am surprised about theis weather change between yesterday and today! In rainy days, I love to be at home with hot chocolate, a film and a thick blanket in the sofa! ❤️

You are doing good. Keep practicing and you will improve over period of time. There’s nothing wrong in the way you wrote and people can understand your message, end of the day that’s what languages do. Gracias 🙏.

2020년 11월 24일

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