Are my sentences error-free? Please help me upgrade them. live-streaming 造句：In China, netizens’ interest in watching live-streaming videos has gone to a new level. As a result, talented common people

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2020년 3월 1일 오전 4:14

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Are my sentences error-free? Please help me upgrade them. live-streaming 造句：In China, netizens’ interest in watching live-streaming videos has gone to a new level. As a result, talented common people have to the chance to cash in on this industry by being host. Their revenues are mainly from advertising or virtual gifts given by their fans. "cash in" is a compound verb, and then can take the preposition "on" when ... it is some sort of activity. Example: The Dow-Jones is sure to keep going down, I need to cash in my shares. Example: I need to cash in on the Pokemon craze. What? I'm too late? Host is a technical internet/computer term, or in media it is the interviewer on a show with one or more guests. You could say "... by becoming video stars". lectures delivered by 造句：Last weekend, I listened to a lecture delivered by a prestigious professor majoring in Quantum physics. remote learning 造句：Although remote learning is time-efficient, as students don’t have to commute to a brick and mortar classroom, they miss out on the opportunity of bonding a peer relationship with their classmates. "of bonding with their classmates." "of forming peer relationships with their classmates. " I like this one most. "of peer relationships with their classmates." "of bonding through peer relationships with their classmates." naughtiness 造句：It is impossible to remove naughtiness from children’s nature, in order to forge a perfect kid. cold-call 造句：Mobile phone users are plagued by cold-calls from unknown companies of real estate, insurance and language training, etc. This is has resulted from illegal disclosure of personal information. place more emphasis on 造句：The government should place more emphasis on human rights rather than simply pursuing economic progression. pursuing economic progression. Progress is the usual word here. Progression would be referring to ... perhaps ... an idealogical context where a society moves through a series of steps - and the government focus is on moving through the steps. Progress is usually just a catch word for more money though it could mean a lot more. how students perform in classroom discussions 造句：The GPA of undergraduates is determined by their final exam results and how they perform in classroom discussions. video-conferencing 造句：Thanks to fast internet speeds, the technology of video-conferencing allows local companies and their overseas branches to generate meetings meet in real time. are no excuse for shirking 造句：Breaking up with your ex-wife is no excuse for shirking your responsibility for your daughter. connections are too wobbly for video calls 造句：Connections were too wobbly for video calls, so we had a voice call instead. parental supervision 造句：Lack Due to lack of parental supervision, the teenagers are involved in the conflicts between gangs. is entitled The "the" is dependent on context. Are a specific group of teenagers being talked about, use "the". All teenagers in general, no "the". The sentence needed a "because of a" or "due to" or something at the beginning, to link the initial idea to the consequences. is entitled 造句：She is entitled to a paid holiday after getting so many dollars brought to her boss bringing in so many dollars for to her boss. Lots of ways the final phrase could have been worded. "for" is required for most of them. Good work once again. Lots of sentences were perfect.

2020년 3월 1일

yama

不客气。I was a little worried you wouldn't know what Pokemon was.

2020년 3월 1일 · 답변

Sandy Lu

I've heard of that a bit, not exactly know what it is, perhaps like bitcoin.

2020년 3월 1일 · 답변

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