delita_chan
waa! kowai! Dallas no tenki wa kowai desu! Waa!
2012년 8월 18일 오전 5:34
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waa! kowai!

Darasu no tenki wa kowai deshita yo! (The weather was scary.)

Darasu no tenki wa kawai desu yo! (Right now the weather is scary.)

 

You are female so you can replace "yo" with "wa" for emphasis, but you don't really but a "!" next to a verb without a emphasis particle.

2012년 8월 18일

waa! kowai!

Dallas no tenki wa kowai desu! Waa!

Darasu no tenki wa kowakatta desu!  

 

Kowakatta means passed. 

 

2012년 8월 18일

waa! kowai!

Dallas(*1) no tenki wa kowai desu! Waa!(*2)

*1 Dallas can be fine if you use alphabets in Japanese sentence.
*2 Waa is fine but personally I think kyaa is better to express the scared feeling.

(These are my suggestions)
1. In present tense
Darasu no tenki wa kowai desu. Kyaa! (;>_<;)

 
2. In past tense (the past form of kowai is kowakatta)
Darasu no tenki wa kowakatta desu. Kyaa! (;>_<;) 

(If you use Japanese letters)

ダラス の 天気 は 怖い です! きゃぁ!
           tenki   kowa
 
I can fully understand what you mean by your writing, good work:-)

2012년 8월 19일
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