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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? In the last 100 years, they had a lot of extraordinary discoveries. And each of discoveries had a large impact in the society. But I'm a young people of 24 years old from France, it's impossible to me to talk efficiently about discoveries that appear before I born. That's why I choose to talk about Internet. In my point of view, Internet is the discovery with the larger impact on the people in my country and always people in the entire world. Internet is a discovery who continues to evolve each year. The benefits of the Internet increase every day. In this essay, I will present the four reasons that push me to choose Internet like the best discovery in the last 100 years. Firstly, Internet offers the possibility to keep in touch with everybody in any situation. For example, if a person in your family decides to go live in foreign country, very far away that your own country, you can communicate with her on real time by Internet. Before Internet, they are only two ways for communicate: -By phone, but it's really expansive; -By post, but your letter arrived only after two weeks or more time! Secondly, Internet is a large base of resources about a large range of various themes. You can read on Internet the literature of writers from around the world. Before internet, when you search some specific information is very hard and long to found it because you need to look for many books in a library. Thirdly, you have access to information in real time. For example, two weeks ago when terrorist attack happened at Charlie Hebdo in Paris, the entire world could have the information instantly. Internets help to find recent illegal activities of the two terrorists and find the friends who help Kouachi's brothers for terrorist attempt. Each concern countries were able to make link and help France and Europe to fight terrorism. Fourthly, network is exploding with the discovery of Internet. Now you can talk with someone that you never see physically. About terrorist attack in Paris two weeks ago, only few hours or days after the attack we could see on Facebook an impressive number of people from entire world expressed messages of support to Paris and French people. The sentence "Je suis Charlie" was taken on Twitter by much more than five millions of people. Internet has been the discovery, in the last 100 years, the most beneficial for people in France for the four reasons discuss in this essay but also for many other reasons. Internet has not finish to surprise us
2015년 1월 25일 오후 9:09
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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?

In the last 100 years, they had there have been a lot of extraordinary discoveries. And each of discoveries has had a large impact in the society. But I'm a young people of 24 years old from 24 year old person from France, it's impossible to for me to talk efficiently about discoveries that appeared before I born. That's why I choose have chosen to talk about Internet. In my point of view, Internet is the discovery with the larger largest impact on the people in my country and always all the people in the entire world. Internet is a discovery who that ('who' is only for people) continues to evolve each year. The benefits of the internet increase every day. In this essay, I will present the four reasons that pushed me to choose internet like as the best discovery in the last 100 years.

Firstly, the internet offers the possibility to keep in touch with everybody in any situation. For example, if a person in your family decides to go live in foreign country, very far away that your own country, you can communicate with her on them in real time by Internet. Before Internet, they are there were only two ways for to communicate:
-By phone, but it's really expansive;
-By post, but your letter arrives only after two weeks or more time!

Secondly, Internet is a large base of resources about a large range of various themes. You can read on the internet the literature of writers from around the world. Before the internet, when you search some specific information it was is very hard and took a long time to found find it because you needed to look for many books in a library.

Thirdly, you have access to information in real time. For example, two weeks ago when the terrorist attack happened at Charlie Hebdo in Paris, the entire world could have the information instantly. The internet helped to find recent illegal activities of the two terrorists and find the friends who helped the Kouachi's brothers' for terrorist attempt. Each concerned country were was able to make link contact and help France and Europe to fight terrorism.

Fourthly, network is exploding with the discovery of Internet. Now you can talk with someone that you never see physically. About After the terrorist attack in Paris two weeks ago, only few hours or days after the attack we could see on Facebook an impressive number of people from entire world who expressed messages of support to Parisian and French people within a few hours or days. The sentence "Je suis Charlie" was taken written on Twitter by much more than five millions of people. 

Internet has been the discovery, in the last 100 years, the most beneficial for people in France for the four reasons discussed in this essay but also for many other reasons. Internet has not finished to surprising us.

2015년 2월 16일

What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?

In the last 100 years, they had there have been a lot of extraordinary discoveries. And each of the discoveries has had a large impact in the society. But I'm a young people person of 24 years old from France and it's impossible to for me to talk efficiently about discoveries that appeared before I born. That's why I am choosing to talk about Internet. In my point of view, the internet is the discovery with the largest impact on the people in my country and always also people in the entire world. The internet is a discovery who that continues to evolve each year. The benefits of the internet increase every day. In this essay, I will present the four reasons that pushed me to choose the internet like as the best discovery in the last 100 years.

Firstly, the internet offers the possibility to keep in touch with everybody in any situation. For example, if a person in your family decides to go live in foreign country, very far away that from your own country, you can communicate with her them in real time by the internet. Before the internet, they are were only two ways for to communicate:
-By phone, but it's really expansive;
-By post, but your letter arrives only after two weeks or more time!

Secondly, the internet is a large base of resources about a large range of various themes. You can read on the internet the literature of writers from around the world. Before the internet, in order to search for some specific information it was is very hard and took a long time to find it because you needed to look for many books in a library.

Thirdly, you have access to information in real time. For example, two weeks ago when the terrorist attack happened at Charlie Hebdo in Paris, the entire world could have the information instantly. The internet helped to find recent illegal activities of the two terrorists and found the friends who helped the Kouachi's brothers' for terrorist attempt. Each concerned country were able to make link-up and help France and Europe to fight terrorism.

Fourthly, network is exploding with the discovery of the internet. Now you can talk with someone that you never see physically. About the terrorist attack in Paris two weeks ago, only few hours or days after the attack we could see on Facebook an impressive number of people from the entire world expressing messages of support for Paris and the French people. The sentence "Je suis Charlie" was taken on Twitter by much more than five millions of people.
The internet has been the discovery, in the last 100 years, the most beneficial for people in France for the four reasons discussed in this essay but also for many other reasons. (The internet has been the most beneficial discovery of the past 100 years) The Internet has not finished surprising us.


2015년 1월 26일
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